Foreshadow's Touch

Acquaintances--
Sultry shoulders brushing fond, as
Mystic willow branches longing--
Sensing lovers' soon delight

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Quickie - Farrell Form by Ryno. 300 points, ended June 25, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
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penman
June 27, 2007
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Excellent
Very creative and wonderful images. Congrats on the silver.
- ten thousand cicadas
  June 27, 2007
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  Thanks so much.
Tangled Angle
June 25, 2007
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Nicely done. Good luck to you.
- ten thousand cicadas
  June 25, 2007
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  Thanks so much Tyler!
Silversunshine
June 25, 2007
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Wow
I like this one alot! It's abstract, but you still understand what's happening! Great write!
- ten thousand cicadas
  June 25, 2007
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  Thanks so much for your kind words!!!
Ryno
June 25, 2007

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Nice work on grabbing the idea of the piece and writing it beautifully and deeply... nice descriptive work too, thanks for being a part of helping my form get out there

Ryan