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Karma's Gavel


Forked tongue
      spews plastic truths;


scorned femme fatale
                              summons 
                   poetic justice;



sealed and delievered
                          by the fall of --

                                                  Karma's gavel.




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  • Desire gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    Magnificent!

    So true and Love this one!
    Powerful words for Karma will
    speak up~ do all the work needed

    Best wishes to You in the contest
    Many blessings too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • FifthDove
    June 25, 2007

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    Wow, yes karma is the one I would fear the most. Nice work on this piece Thanks for the entry and best wishes in the contestDove

  • FifthDove
    June 25, 2007
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    Your prompt is: Judgment