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Darkness

Darkness falls silent on shadows
That blend into the night,
And leave no long impression
To mark their languid flight.

I'd give away my angels
To start anew this day.
Perhaps, this new passing
Might find a better way.

I'll ressurect the embers
Feed from the feral flame.
At the end of this existence
God will know my name!

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  • I was unsure about this. Especially the last stanza left me a little bit confused with its exclamation mark. Vampires have a hard time of it I suppose.


  • hisaddiction
    April 28
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    Well well....

    You rock..end of story.


  • Beanbiscuit
    July 21, 2007
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    Fabulous anthem about sacrifice.