Satisfaction

Nocturnal huntress
                  on the prowl.

Eyes spy midnight snack;

               -pounce-

                    lips licked in satifaction.

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Desire
June 25, 2007

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Wow!
Ok Me hungry now
Love this one~

Yep~ a snack to satiate
Woooooo hooooooooo

Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
Bedroom Eyes
June 25, 2007

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Oh my goodness...

You all are killing me tonight! So much seductive sass & predatory tendencies have got me squirming!

Great metaphors and imagery in this piece. Try not to bite too hard ok?

Awesome job!

Good luck!

*NOTE* Please don't award the judge (ME ) any points or respond to my comments until AFTER the contest is complete Thanks!!
Heavenly Angel
June 25, 2007
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Wowser!
How sinfully sweet is this?!?!?!?
Very sexy, girl...very sexy indeed!!!!