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The Sun

Shines,
Bright,
Burns Harshly,
Orangey,
Yellowey,
And all the above,
Inspires those with no inspiration
Lifeless yet full of life,
Shiny yet so dark,
As it is and always will be,
(until Global Warming kicks in)
the sun.

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  • Rosemary Stroebel silver member
    June 27, 2007
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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Considering your age I am going to overlook the orangey, yellowey sun

    The idea behind the poem is interesting and can actually carry a very strong message.

    Glad to have you here at AP and please feel free to contact me or any online Greeter if you need help here at AP.

    Let the ink flow and your fingers dance

    Rosemary


  • KrissyK11
    June 25, 2007
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    Written By

    This poem is written by:
    KrissyK11 & lillie-got-bass