Mouths of many were muzzled
Staring at him horrifically puzzled
Mad eyes emerged from a corridor
Devil brandished a scorching blade
Unsheathed steel sharply groans
Screeching howl of spitting metal
Calescent blade perfectly honed
Soliciting his darkest perversions
“I am Hazu, the Light Taker.”
“If you trade me your crimson
I’ll return with precious silver. . .”
“Suffer my sweaty mammals!”
His methods of mutilating them
Were unpredictably curious
He could be surgically delicate
Or theatrically furious
Teasing the tip of his blade
Across bare skin that twitched
Crawling with murderous thirst
A desperate appetite itched
Feathered into methodical slices
Stretching out furrows of flesh
Gouged out with a jerky force
Shaving skin into a gory mess
Corpus delicti excising genitalia
Sensorium elated body pyrexia
Whimpering out in shadowy ooze
Bled the inky gloss of vital fluids
A harrower threshing chaste victims
Barborous contraptions agonize them
Drowning his tongue in sanguinary sickness
Spewed the warm bitter back in their faces
Cleaver raised to the beaming moonlight
Shimmering in the haze of violent white
Fountains of ruby spurt out the shoulder
Bloodletting with an erratic pulsation
Scribbled out in circles of madness
Burning across her pale white torso
Plunging through her tortured heart
Squirting out in suctioned bursts
Carving out the lies inside you
From the shame your flesh holds
Removing them like a cancer
As his blade digs through the folds
Spread out in a slaughterhouse panorama
Shearing through a moonshine massacre
Each incision he meticulously makes
Renders grief in uncontrollable shakes
Skeletal carcasses - deteriorating flesh
Incisions intersect where the heart rests
Bodies illuminated with lacerations
Appendages entangled in devastation
Scintillating silver thrashed them to bits
Corpses riddled with puncture wounds
A gruesome scene of horrific agony
Dungeon lavished in ornate dissection
Hematic cleansing imbrued in ecstasy
Immersed in a tub full of warm viscera
Sponging the body with your innards
Swirling around in the rotted remains
Bodies spread out in dismembered piles
Torso’s excavated for their rich entrails
Slivers of flesh and guts adorned the walls
Howls of death through cryptic atmosphere
Deteriorating sculptures of impaled humans
Eyes bulging forth like bug-eyed freaks
Aggressively staring through the darkness
Faces in horror frozen in rigor mortis
Steam pluming from pulsating bowels
Ribcages shattered, punctured sides
Strangled with your own intestines
Bodies recovered remain unidentified
There is no mercy only extreme fatality
Bodies slung on the ceiling upside down
Hung by hooks gouged in their skulls
Blood drizzled over maggot-filled grounds
Rocking motion of a dying corpse
Pangs of clouded misery
Life draining out in dark streaks
Murdering was his only escape
Author notes
Cannibal Corpse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A contest entry
- Gore laced Insanity by Synthetic-Nightmare.
750 points, ended July 9, 2007, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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brilliantly dark piece. wow! i am in awe of you... you amaze me.
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well well well
What an amazing writing, it is not everyday you read something as beautifully descriptive as this. Makes me feel warm all over. I especially like
"Hematic cleansing imbrued in ecstasy
Immersed in a tub full of warm viscera
Sponging the body with your innards
Swirling around in the rotted remains"
What great pictures you paint with your words, you are truly talented.
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thanks! yeah, i really like that one too.
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Hmmm, somehow I'm glad I lost to someone better than me, you really are the writer of horror.
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Thank you sir! All the great entries I had read before writing this (including your entries) had really challenged me. I'm sure this is my darkest piece, maybe even my best.
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HOLY-MOTHER-FUCKIN-SHIT!!!!!!!!!!! Just.....oh my geez.....THIS IS SOOOOOOOO WONDERFUL! THIS IS LIKE, THE EXACT REPLICA OF WHAT I WAS LOOKING FOR! SHIT, this is total, complete, all out mutilation. Live, SAVAGE BUTCHERY AT IT'S FINEST!!!!!!! Damn, you are ONE TALENTED MOTHERFUCKER! One would think you were a serial killer, haha. Wow, this is.....just, ASTOUNDING! AMAZING! THE CARNAGE, THE GORE, THE VIOLENCE, THE MURDER, EVERYTHING.......imagine walking in upon a scene like this, everything flowed so utterly wonderful, hell, THIS IS HOT AS HELL!!! HAVE SOME OF THESE, I'D GIVE YOU 50 BILLION IF I COULD:
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Thanks!
I'm glad you liked it! I tried to be as descriptive about cutting & hacking as possible. I am definitely by no means a serial killer, I can barely fillet the fish I catch, especially if they're still flopping their little tailfins as I cut them open. LOL
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