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My Lady of Whims

Where shall we go today, my dear?
I asked my Lady Muse
She said I don't know, what do you think?
I think I'll let you choose
I suggested a little humor
to relieve some recent stress
She suggested perhaps a poem
about a turtle in a dress
I giggled just a little
then said, dig a little deeper, dear
she said how 'bout the troubles
this book has brought you near
and so I spoke to Janice
suggested we needed to write
to display some of the frustration
and we did it, just last nite
So we wrote metaphorically
and made From Across The Sea
which made my Lady of Whim
full of smiles and all giggly

Author notes

Just a brief note although we did indeed write a metaphorical piece about this, it was inspired by Janice first, not me.

This is inspired by the daily title from the Title Challenge Group:

http://allpoetry.com/group/info/The+Titles+Challenge+Group

Feel free to apply, but please include a reference to me in your app, thanks!

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  • Viva La Vie Boheme
    July 27, 2007

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    Hoodwinked!

    *laughs* This poem made me feel all light-hearted. I wonder how a conversation with my muse would go? I love the rhyme in this, too, it adds to the flow instead of takes away, as some rhyme does. A beautiful piece!


  • Lady Altheia
    July 26, 2007

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    Hoodwinked

    You are still a great poet. Another great poem by you that I have read. I hope al;l these wonderful hoodwinks cheer you up.


  • Lady Altheia
    June 26, 2007
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    Hehehe, my muse takes over my writing. I have read that other poem and I thought it was great. Tben again, you are a great poet.


  • Recluse Writer gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    Glad you pair are having some fun now
    Still wondering about 'then' though...did ye have a swear jar per chance???
    You pair probably coulda financed all the postage in the throws of creating the book...


  • Janice M Pickett
    June 25, 2007

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    lol giglly one *l*

    This is so cute. Ah, its good to have a bit of fun along the way and ease the stresssssssssssss. Phew that feels better

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