i knew authority -
she sat in sunken ground
biting ankles
(blood runs thick as mud)
Author notes
mud puddles can be mean when we step in them.
A contest entry
- 15/15/15 Quickie by sheltered.
425 points, ended June 25, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This would have done better I think but it actually wasn't done in time. Still worth a mention.
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My Internet connection was acting up, so I couldn't get to the poem and post it. I'm sorry~
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(I was also hosting another contest at the time, but I was holding up judging on that one to write this. I think Verizon hates me.)
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Nice. Very abstract yet understandable.
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Yes, yes they can. I know the feeling, considering I am seventeen and still play in them (that is the child in me that will never go away). Great job with the prompt!
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