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Trust

What do you do,
when the one you trust,
slams the door?
What do you say,
when the one you trust,
doesn't understand why.
How do you deal,
when the one you trust,
just betrays you?

Do you lose trust?
Who do you trust?
Maybe you just shouldn't take chances...
So here's my conclusion,
trust no one but God.

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  • angelbabybear
    August 30, 2007
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    deep...makes me think who to trust. Very excellen


  • Summer Dawn
    August 29, 2007

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    again, this is an emotional release, but not poetic formed. if you would like some help learning or practicing sometime i can help you if you like.

  • BetterLeftUnknown
    August 28, 2007
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    This one was much better than Teardrops in my opinion.
    Very easy to connect to and very sincere.


  • Emmerzlynn
    June 25, 2007
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    yea

    very matter of fact but good

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