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Bird

Up-- Up! My heart lifts.
The way you say, "Smile, sweet."
stops my pulse-- lover.

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  • The Burning Year
    June 25, 2007
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    lifting the carpet...

    I find the money I have missed and needed for a long time...


  • Fall.Of.Rome
    June 25, 2007

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    Oh my...I quite liked this. Very good stuff. I have no words to properly appreciate this. Thank you, and good luck