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Wondering and waiting,
When her beloved will come.
Sunrise drawing near.
A horse drawn carriage approaches,
Her beloved has finally come home.
He comes and kisses her.
She looks up to the sunlit sky,

Burning in place.
All that is left is two mounds of ashes.

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  • Nightsin666
    October 31
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    im your boyfriends friend and i really like your poem and i know how you feel since i also write very sorrowful poem


  • Flamenco
    June 28, 2007

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    Wow. Major loneliness at first, then hope when she sees the carriage coming that this time he'll treat her better. Dark ending....when the sky like zaps them. BOOM! They're gone. ALl because he kissed her. Not cool, Mr. Prince dude. nuh uh.

    Great write.