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Celebration of Life

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Many have gone on their way
I thank the Lord for letting me see another 4th of July day
Some take it as a day to eat
I think of it as a day of fellowship & retreat
Being thankful and kind in so many ways
Making the best of my days
showing love to all
Pick up a man when he or she fall
Looking back on those that sacrificied their lives
leaving behind memories of husbands, brothers, sisters, daughters, sons & wives
Life is not going to be perfect but
giving thanks in memories...sure makes it worth it

So take time not only on this day

Thank the Lord for making a way

America is home

today

in

everyway.

Live the Dream.

 

 

 

HAPPY 4TH OF JULY

BE HAPPY

BE SAFE

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  • queen Moderators member
    July 6, 2008
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    We all need to take a moment and remember the ones that gave up so much so we could be free Awesome poem Good luck in the contest


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    July 6, 2008
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    It's great to read how this 4th of july inspires you in your life...I am sure it's every day a 4th of july for you....
    You're a great Sis....
    Good luck in this Partners contest

    XXJeannette


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    July 6, 2008
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    Good job telling us what the 4th means to you...Good luck in the contest...

  • Warrior7
    July 5, 2008

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    A sensational poem here mate, your words ring true i raise my glass and toast to it.


  • catz Moderators member
    July 3, 2008
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    You've given us all some things to remember here. Your poem is written in such a caring way in honor of our country. Yes, it's true that many think of 4th of July as a big picnic and fireworks day, and that's good but we also need to remember what the day really means to all of us... our Declaration of Independence from tyrany and emphasizing our freedoms.

    A superb poem and I wish you good luck in the contest

    Dee


  • wingsofgold25 silver member
    July 3, 2008

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    This is realy beautiful I loved it so patritotic in every way LOved the Picture.
    Thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest.

  • queen Moderators member
    July 4, 2007

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    We are all blessed more than we realize, we each need to take a moment and give thanks for all that has been done for our country Good luck in the contest

  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    July 4, 2007

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    Very good poem, and for sure to be helpfull every day, not closing your eyes to the ones that suffer, but giving help...I like that thought.

    Great write sis,
    Good luck in this contest,
    XXJeannette


  • FifthDove
    July 1, 2007

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    A very good poem here Ephiphany, I loved reading your thoughts, especially the part about the ones who sacrificied their lives. Best wishes in the contest


    • Ephiphany
      July 1, 2007
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      Hey Dove

      Thank you, I really appreciate your comment as I always do.
      Ephiphany


  • Florida Sunshine
    June 28, 2007

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    HOLY smokes you've blown it out of the water! NICE JOB! I totally agree~ Thanks so much for entering my contest. I love the last graphic~ I do bless them all!

    • Ephiphany
      June 29, 2007
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      Hey Malicai

      Thank you for the wonderful comment. I enjoyed doing this and being creative too.
      Nice contest, might I add...
      Thanks
      Ephiphany


  • Blaque01
    June 27, 2007
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    Aww, this is sentimental...lovely work [piff

    • Ephiphany
      June 27, 2007
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      Hey my Friend

      Thanks, you are always so kind and real with your comments on my work. I am greatful to have you in my life.
      Piff


  • esroddo silver member
    June 25, 2007

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    Beatifully expressed

    We do need to think of others more then just having a party and eating and drinking. We need to see who out there don't have something to eat or drink. A place to lay his or her head at night. We need to look more and indulge less. Beautiful write sister (LISA)
    "ife is not going to be perfect but
    giving thanks in memories...sure makes it worth it

    So take time not only on this day

    Thank the Lord for making a way"


  • Huntress silver member
    June 25, 2007

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    We all need to remember our country a little better than we do. Excellent poem


  • debilynn gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    wonderful poem here. apt title. remembering those who made our country free. we are blessed indeed. thank you for sharing this. keep writing! God bless you always


  • Rele anmwe
    June 25, 2007
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    This is nice


    • Ephiphany
      June 25, 2007
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      Hey my Friend...

      Thanks for the comment. Short, but nice NT way, I like the photo
      Ephiphany

  • catz Moderators member
    June 25, 2007

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    This is a pretty cool poem, and thank you for entering the contest. Yay, you're the first one

    Good luck

    Dee

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