I scream your name out
But you don't respond.
I try to get your attention
Then you take it, and throw it away.
You make me be at war with myself
That you don't love me enough to be with me.
You make me not want me
And I don't blame you.
You seem that you hate me
For who I am.
Do I seem small for you?
You take me in and throw me right back out.
Why must you do this to me?
I should let you know
That I'm leaving town.
You can follow
But not to close.
If you come back to me
I'll do the same thing you did to me.
I thought you loved me
But I guess I was wrong.
You just used me
And told me wrong.
I followed you
But you chased me away.
You make me not want me
And I don't blame you.
You seem that you hate me
For who I am.
Do I seem small for you?
You take me in and throw me right back out.
Why must you do this to me?
I should let you know
That I'm leaving town.
You can follow
But not to close.
If you come back to me
I'll do the same thing you did to me.
A contest entry
- The Power of Thoughts by parasol.
1500 points, ended July 21, 2007, 19 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Very Well Writen
it was very hard to decided the winner
but all in all evan though you were all very good
and hope you will enter my next contest comeing soon
so i am now saying tank you for takeing part in my first contest
Kepp up the good work
Thanks
xBx
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This was quite powerful. It’s great how such simple words can create involved messages and emotions. I can really relate to this. This was an excellent piece of prose. Such strong thoughts that do not surrender at any point. Love can be such an unfair joker in life. But I guess life is all about trial and error. This was very well written. Thank you for your entry. Good luck in my contest.
- Andi
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I loved it the first time I read it and i love it the second time! Bravo!
write more soon!
*peace*
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