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water


beneath the full moon
darkness licks a thousand stones
between reflections


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  • Dream Drifter
    June 28, 2007

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    a nice mixture of words here.

    maybe one day I will try this kind of writing.

    You deep a fine work here.

    Thank you for creating this read.

  • daniellaa arisen
    June 26, 2007

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    It seems to me that something gigantic has changed within your writing since I last read it. I feel like you have stopped trying to impress readers with your outstanding diction, but with the thoughts beneath them. As I've said before, you are seasoning your poetry perfectly now. Instead of overshadowing the truly powerful words with other strong vocabulary, you are pacing yourself....

    And I LOVE it.


  • Cant-touch-this
    June 25, 2007

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    Really love this thought you have shared...The beautiful moon shares her glow and licks a thousand stones between reflections thank you for sharing...really enjoyed


  • yourbentangel
    June 25, 2007

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    Reflective

    This is what captivates me.... You take something that has happened everyday since the dawn of time and make this beautiful thought. I see the picture. Sometimes there are meanings and sometimes there is just exactly what it is and I like that alot