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Friendship

deep, abiding relationships
newly discovered treasures
someone to share your day with
another to generate pleasures

sometimes they bloom into more
others become much like kin
some make you laugh and cry
others have yet to begin

know that each have their place
a reason to come into your day
to chase away a dark cloud
replaced with a sunshine ray

no matter the level they're at
regardless the depth they bring
cherish each like a jewel
and whatever, to you, they bring

Author notes

A simple truth, that everyone that comes into your life is there for a reason and if they leave your life, that too is OK, for their part has been played and the show must go on, so do not mourn their loss for long, rather cherish what they brought to you and use it to cherish those in your life now and those not yet here.

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  • Lady Altheia
    July 26, 2007

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    Hoodwinked

    This poem brings new meaning as i read it again. You know who your real froends are when you are at the lowest points in your life.


  • The Poetic Angel
    June 26, 2007

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    congrats on the Gold sis this write was sure deserving of it .... loves ya x minxie x


  • Lady Altheia
    June 26, 2007
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    Well this is easy to see why you won gold. I don't have the friendship that you describe. I have moore people leaving my life than entering.


  • Janice M Pickett
    June 25, 2007

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    A very valid thought process

    Excellent poem with a great message. We all should apply this to everyday life also. This is a trophy winner for sure.


  • tawk gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    So True!

    Wow what a wonderful view on friendship and the many meanings that it has in our lives. I too believe that everything happens for a reason and that people come into our lives for a reason too. You have expressed this so well in your write. What a wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it.


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    June 25, 2007

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    awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is such a beautiful piece of poetry here I do hope it all has a reason why they come and go.I do know that if they are leaving my life it is always giving a lot of hurt..and I am not sure if that's something I want to cherish or give it a reason why it happens....

    But I loved your piece..this is Gold my friend
    XXJeannette


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    June 25, 2007

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    I agree completely with your assessment of friendship; some are situational and some are enduring, but each one brings a special blessing to my life. Thank you for your entry and good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz


    • Lady-Pegasus
      June 26, 2007
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      WOW, how random and unexpected! TY my friend it was certainly a surprise! HEHE sometimes when I let my Lady of Whims (my muse) reign she can pull things together in a matter of minutes that can be better than the ones I slave over hehe! TYTYTY

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