I feel an empty void
as i read this aloud
I hope you feel me way
up within the spiritual
cloud
No pain and no more
sorrow, but for me with
out you it feels like no
more tomorrow
It was sad seeing you as
you slowly went away, knowing
what was to come, like this
personal solemn day
You did see all of us, one by
one, telling all of us in your
own special way, the battle i
just can't win even in pain your
face and soul kept up a brave and
courageous grin
Your inner soul is stronger than i
ever knew, but your gone now and
deep down i am spiritually blue
Many times i never told you i loved
you, but without speaking for some
reason i am sure you knew
My voice is quiet and so is my soul
to take care of people and make you
proud was my personal spiritual goal
I scribble on paper til it becomes art
even words i write become something and
for that, I thank you Mom for giving me
that artistic Bond
This is my love that i show to you as my soul
is quiet and so is my voice, to write a poem
was 100% my choice
June 8Th of 2007 my mom could no longer wait
God closed her eyes and stopped her breath,
the creator God stopped Mom's pain,
47 years and four days after my birth she took
god's unseens spiritual hand, even if we are sad
the creator God, i am sure thinks its nothing but
Grand.
Brad Evans
Your youngest Son
Author notes
This is for my Mom
who lost her battle on jume 8th-2007
this is my way of saying,
(I LOVE YOU MOM )
Please tell me what you think
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
A belated spotlight, I was sure I had commented on this sad but comforting write...Your mum will always continue to be very proud of you, a son she loved and brought up, you have expressed your love for her in such a beautiful poem, it deeply touches the reader...I am so sorry for your loss and will keep in in my thoughts and prayers
Much love ~Lilac
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE
This is an amazing piece! I lost my younger brother a couple years ago and this brought me back to that time. This is an amazing piece that nearly made me cry, but in a good way. This poem deserved the spotlight!
Well done!
Luna.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!!
WOW!!!! This teared me up today! What a read! I lost my dad not quite three years ago, and so I can completely relate to what you are saying. I have not lost my mom yet, but it is still much the same feelings! I am sorry for your loss.
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Lions Have Pride!!
Oh My
This is one Powerful piece You have penned fellow Poet and I am sorry for Your loss
Pain is not something I wish to envision on anyone and I'm sorry she went through pain
am happy she is not in pain anymore...
also Honored to have the opportunity to read a piece which touches deep
Thank You for sharing this Precious Treasure with us
I imagine she was... and still is Proud of You
for all You did and still continue to do
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul~~
Best wishes always
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Beautiful thoughts, Brad!
You have such a fine name, and it was a gift to you from your mother. Always be sure your name is kept proud because your mom would want it that way. Your mom is not gone... she is just nearby in a better place where she can still see you and love you, and you can do the same toward her. 
You can talk to her any time you want, and when you say your prayers you can ask God to tell her you love her... and anyway, that is what I do for my mom who has gone to Heaven.
Violet
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