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Lifelike

Rosy painted
Cheeks of satin
Rub against my
Face. I hug my
Doll so tight.
She’s mine, alive as
Human, her
Delicate eyes twinkling,
Tattered, ragged, old
As ever but still
Mine. I whisper all my
Secrets to her and she
Keeps them - she’s a
Faithful friend who sits upon my
Pillow, waiting for
Me every day. My
Little ragged doll, who’s
Always there…
Lifeless, but lifelike still.

xox Blue Baby

Author notes

about my little rag doll, Blue Baby, who I got when I was born she's so awesome

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  • my02U
    June 25, 2007

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    yay i already knew this but you rock lise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry im going overboard but im a "happy camper"
    lillie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • tsarina
    June 25, 2007
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    i suspect this poem is about blue baby... hence the blue background


    • riasme
      June 25, 2007
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      well duh, if you read the author's notes, you wouldn't be so clueless...


  • blondone silver member
    June 25, 2007

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    Awe this is sweet and cute emotions run deep as you write about your doll keep this doll forever you may need to pass it down someday...


  • XXbLAcKNAiLPoLisHXx
    June 25, 2007

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    wow this poem is even better than mine!!!
    i really like this line
    Delicate eyes twinkling,
    very vivid with your description of your doll...cool you had her since you were born!! never ever had anything that long before

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