The boogie man has gone away
You have no more to fear
A brand new life you start today
That’s cause enough for cheer
But I know you are hurting
You‘re unsure what lies ahead
But with me one thing’s for certain
You have nothing more to dread
I want to kiss away your tears
Love away your pain
I want to take all of your hurt away
You have been suffering for years
You’ll never be again
A new life you’ll begin today
Girl, you are so sweet and good
It simply blows my mind
How anyone could be so cruel
To some one so sweet and kind
I know that you’re uneasy
To trust me is so hard to do
But I only want to please, see
For I’m so in love with you
I want to kiss away your tears
Love away your pain
I want to take all of your hurt away
You have been suffering for years
You’ll never be again
A new life you’ll begin today
The bad days are behind you
The future’s bright ahead
For you have me beside you
To give you hope and love instead
There’s nothing I won’t give you
My heart, my life, my soul
My love will be forever true
It is you that makes me whole
I want to kiss away your tears
Love away your pain
I want to take all of your hurt away
You have been suffering for years
You’ll never be again
A new life you’ll begin today
Author notes
Abuse, recovery....love Gizmobob
A contest entry
- Truth Of Life contest round THREE (invite only) by xandercheerios.
1000 points, ended July 31, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Very much a song, made clear by the chorus. Your theme is one theme? Or a linked theme? The rhymes in this one are great, but they rhythm isn't quite so. If there was a tune, it'd be easier to follow, but I don't know what it is. Good luck.
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exquisite poem
I cannot believe how much this poem touched me. It is amazing. I absolutely love it! Keep in touch with me so I can always have your poetry at hand. Keep on writing! Your rhyming is perfect as are your words.



