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Tease me (10 word quicky)

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You tease,
you lick,
fondle,
bite,
kiss.

Make me whimper.

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  • Cant-touch-this
    June 26, 2007

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    Make me whimper you did! nicely said and asked for little warm in herevery good!Thanks for sharing


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    June 25, 2007
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    So blunt and sensual.
    Good luck.


  • wolfspiritguide gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    this is great. oh my, sensual didn't even occur to me...i feel pathetic lol.


  • Naridill
    June 25, 2007

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    Haha I don't even this this is remotely anon with the sexiness of this, hehe. Little bland this one though, but still nice and sensual.
    Thankies for entering, much luck.


  • shirk
    June 25, 2007

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    Her head on the border is odd

    But onto the poem.

    I love the idea behind this. You make it so sensual in so few words.


  • Zimora de Rhyven
    June 25, 2007
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    *licks lips*

    oh love, we think alike

  • Naridill
    June 25, 2007
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    Your prompt is - 'Whimper'

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