Raven locks cascade; her clinical temptation
Where silver tongue flicks, tasting her frustration
A look to tame the beast, as she sits upon her throne
Wisps of mentholated breath, his heart turned to stone
Gaze into her eyes; a coaxing, liquid abyss,
To seal his fated doom with one hopeless kiss
Her teasing allure, his name she whipers on the breeze
Commanding his attention, on the ground to his knees
The stakes to her game; raised a little higher
For 'neath her fatal tail, awaits a wicked desire
Within her dream-like web, he seems completely locked
Jolted to the core, transfixed, he feels her shock
A fallen victim he's become, to the spell she's put him under
To gasp one final breath and succumb temptation's wonder
No barriers exist, hear her screaming in the night,
The constant seduction of the Siren's plight
Author notes
Option 1-wordbank
Option 6- picture inspired
With a litte of option 4- fantasy and a slight of option 2 - erotic
In a list
A contest entry
- Take up your Quill and Pen me a Masterpiece by Lord Merlynn.
800 points, ended June 27, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A gorgeous and sensual masterpiece Storm!
I can find nothing wrong with it.
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Thank you hun, appreciate your words (and boost of confidence).
Storm
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Great
this is wonderful! it has great rhythm and I really like the topic
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Thank you for the comment, much appreciated.
Storm
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Put them all together. . .
HOT! HOT! HOT!
I knew you could do it!
(does a little wiggle in the shoulders)
This was aluring and brought the picture to life!
A wonderful entry - Good Luck in the contest Beautiful!
A very smooth read! Love your style.
Tang
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Thank you sweetie. And thanks for the encouragement. It was actually a cool picture and it took a bit to decide which way to go with it. Appeciate it hun.
Storm
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