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Biting The Hourglass

The storm rolls in
Lightning shattering the sky

Lovers Absent
The Tempest Begins Anew

And I'm left longing for you

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  • Cupcrazy gold member
    June 25, 2007
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    Wonderful take on the prompt


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    June 25, 2007
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    Your Prompt is: "Savannah Nights"