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Tropical Seduction

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You sit there,
knowing I want  you
Soft and ripe
waiting for me to devour you
teasing me with your scent
Slowly reaching for you
Eager to get to your succulence
Nibbling gently
feeling juices starting to drip
Wiping my mouth
with the back of my hand
Licking my lips
Not ready to stop yet
Wanting all of  you
I put more into my mouth
The sweetness making me wild
Every taste bud alive and becoming
addicted to  your taste
Finally reaching your hardness
Sucking up the last bit of  my
tasty treat
Feeling completely and utterly
satisfied.




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My fruit was Mango

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  • Mykeee
    August 3, 2007

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    HAHAHAHAHA!! this was OUTSTANDING. You are in my head. I truly can see this with all of the seductive sensuality and passionate feel of it. I want to change my name to Mango Mike now
    Great piece ~ Mykey


  • Knight70
    July 23, 2007

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    seductive and alluring........

    I used "tasty treat" in my my poem, A Red Fox Wakes, but not quite in the same way. Wow! You gave new meaning to the word "seduction!"


  • Ephiphany gold member
    July 5, 2007

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    GodMother....

    I feel so ashamed I really wanted that MANGO
    wow, you deserved this trophy, because it caputred the reader from start to finish...I wonder...hmmm how many people, after reading this went to the Farmer's Market lookin for that mango
    Wonderful!


  • Laura
    July 4, 2007
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    ohhh now this is amazing bloody amazing well done to you love a gold for sure xxxx


  • Whoochi gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    DAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM who would have thought fruit so sexy and seductive, well ME, one of my favorite food fantasies..me and a strawberry and...ok..well...sorry I got carried away...Juice write BB...and man, when ya done with Mango Mister here...well tell him I have some melons for him to ball..LMAO..told ya I was in a mood....BEWARE!


  • michellemybelle gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    wow wow wow
    this was great! Juicy and seducative. Love the pic as well.
    I think I shall go make myself some fruit salad...lol
    well done!
    Michelle


  • Amera gold member
    June 25, 2007

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    Oh my! This is fantastic dear poetess. I'm glad you posted the picture to keep it "G" rated. Well I must tell you the picture didn't work because now I need a shower. WoW girl!

    Love,
    Amera ♥

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