I need your touch
as your fingers find my face
to soften the blow.
I just want to dream in roses
and sip soft words of poetry
in sprinkles of Summer
when love is new
and rain is gentle upon my lashes;
trying to remember
a simpler day
when chasing butterflies
was all that mattered,
Take my hand
and let me feel your heart
beat softly...
♥♥
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Author notes
"QUilted Impressions"
A contest entry
- Quickie ~ Reserve your spot Now! by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended June 24, 2007, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
A beautifully composed piece, so elloquently penned, a write filled with gentle love, so pleasant to read...your precious lines made me sigh...
Congratulations on the trophy, well desrved
~Lilac
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Lions Have Pride!!!
Wow!!!!!!!!! Lynda this is fantastic!!!!!!! I love it!!! What a great read this is!!!Congrats on the well deserved Silver!!!
Nyetta
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Lions have pride!
Aw! This is beautiful! I love the words you used and the unique form. Great alliteration with "sprinkles of Summer"
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE
How soft and lovely, with amazing images, heartfelt and sweet.
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!
Wow...simply beautiful. I love the flow of this piece, its very wavey and romantic. Great write!
hugs,
Steph
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Lions Have Pride
Once again you have captured the beauty of romance and sprinkled it across the page in well crated words and phrases. Beautiful thoughts that flow as gently as the waves upon the shore. Beautifully done. Great Job.
*Go with God* my daughter,
Valerie
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!!
Your word choices for this piece are just perfect! They flow together beautifully. I love all the nature images you worked into the piece...it really helps tie it in to the picture. Congrats on the silver! >pixxie<
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE
A warm and charming poem. Love was just written all over this one. It was written in a very sentimental way to the one you love. Every word just memorable. Very worthy of the trophy. Thank you for sharing such a lovely piece. It is quit beautiful.
~Snappy~
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LIONS HAVE PRIDE!
Very nice title. A lovely write and presentation. Such a serene piece. Very good imagery, flow and tone. Lovely depth of feeling. Vivid descriptives. Very good word choice, alliteration and nice assonance. Congratulations on winning Silver. Well deserved.
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Lions Have Pride!!
Wow!
Powerful piece penned busy bee!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win
Woooooooooo hooooooooooooooooooo
Loved it!
and those butterflies
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Oh this is exquisite! I love the soft gentleness of this piece. Amazing! thanks for entering and good luck!
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i love it!
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awww ty
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prompt: quiltted impressions
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