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Old Tears

Three words
Released from concealment
Antique lies from
Ancient betrayal,
Only dulled memories
And exhausted emotions
Remain
Too many tears
I had shed that I believed
Would rust my skin
Too many hours
I had spent wasted
But I smile
And lie
"I love you, too..."

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  • Celticmoon
    June 24, 2007

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    WOW!
    Now that truly is something unique to come from this prompt. thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Kaleidoscopeyes
    June 24, 2007
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    well i wish the photo didn't have the marks on it, ill see if i can find a different one

  • Celticmoon
    June 24, 2007
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    prompt: sepia tears