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My dream love.

If I could have anyone I would want a srotng man,
one who would care for me and protect me.
Someone to be by myside and to show me I can,
can what you say,I can be free.


I know no one is perfect but,
thats not what I want or need.
I need someone sweet to love.
someone who with I don't need to pleed.


I only wonder if he will love me,
will his voice be gentel as a dove.
what wil he be like,
my one,my only,dream love.

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  • Star Shine
    September 27, 2007
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    I like the rhythm of this very much, and the "dream" of finding this person, the yearning, comes through the words very strongly. Please spell check. Thanks for the great entry.