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Amazing Hate

Fuel my fire

Light the match and let it go



Let it go...



I'll burn for you

But only if, as I die

You hear my longing screams



I'll fall to ashes and destroy everthing I have become

Just for you



Does that make you feel whole?

Does it satisfy your craving?



What do you want from me?



You hate me

You hate all that I am

You hate everything I stand for



But I am right

And I am just



You are nothing...

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  • Forlorn Dreams
    June 24, 2007
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    this is very powerful. its almost a slap in the face to whoever it was written about. it was great though, very unique. hate is a strong word, and this poems depicts that very clearly. i enjoyed reading it, its a style all your own. great piece!
    Kelcey