Cool spring rain kisses
bared flesh
as Mother Nature begins
a spiritual cleansing.
Mind swims,
lost in thought
as eyes trip
over dynamic hues
swaying in the breeze.
Heart sings
in graditude
as dirt of the mundane
is lifted
and the soul breathes --
unrestrained freshness.
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Ah freshness, this makes me feel like i had a mint, or i'm in a valley on a beautiful day. very well done!
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lovely poetry here, imagery and expression so well done; i saw the hues as a rainbow and the metaphoric cleansing as renewal as in spring a time for naure to renew... excellent...PK
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beautifully done!
Soft and lovely...
I adore every line of this!
TY for entering!
Lynda
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Wow, L-O-L-O-L-O-V-E the picture, it rocks, fits very well too. The poem is great, I love it, great take on the prompt and I hope you do well in the contest!
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awesome picture and it adds to the poem
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This is wonderful!
I love all of the colors and feeling
of this one. Beautiful work here and
good luck to you in the contest!
Jeremy0826 -
your prompt is
falling butterflies
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