of an angel
into glorious paradise,
there your sorrows shall fade
Let all your
worries end
right now
so you
may rest
in peace
Take your dreams
to new heights
my best wishes to you...
and take my blessing
while your at it
Ride on the wings
of an angel
into glorious paradise,
there your sorrows shall fade
Let all your
worries end
right now
so you
may rest
in peace
Take your dreams
to new heights
my best wishes to you...
and take my blessing
while your at it
of an angel
into glorious paradise,
there your sorrows shall fade
Let all your
worries end
right now
so you
may rest
in peace
Take your dreams
to new heights
my best wishes to you...
and take my blessing
while your at it
Author notes
i thot it was 15 words so that's what i did
and realized it was 15 lines
so sorry if it\s soo junky
cuz the time is already up right?
A contest entry
- 15 lines/15 entries/15 min...pay it forward! by poet2angels.
475 points, ended June 24, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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pretty write...
Sorry for the confusion...
Lots of nice thoughts here..Ty for entering...
Lynda
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This is good, but I sorta feel like it is missing something, I know you were rushed when you figured out that it was 15 lines!
I though that at first too, but luckily I did a doubletake on the rules and found out.
Anyways, it's a nice write, I enjoyed reading it and good luck! -
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yah the first 15 words were my original one...and the rest...oh well
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not to bad, but I feel you could have added more to it.
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Just to let you know, it's fifteen lines not words.
Good luck to you here!
Jeremy0826 -
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yah i just realized that and i had to change it in like 5 seconds
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your prompt is
"dreams take flight"
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