On the ocean shore
Listening to the crumbling waves
Just watching the always changing
Painted skies
Delicate
Complex colors
Intricately weaved
Radiant Reds
Sultry Oranges
Fiery Yellows
Brilliant blues
Perfect purples
Luminous Shades
Lustful hues
Simply divine
A contest entry
- 15 lines/15 entries/15 min...pay it forward! by poet2angels.
475 points, ended June 24, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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beautiful!
I love where the prompt took you
Lovely imagery and beautiful language...
TY for entering!
Lynda
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nice vivid poem!!
i really like it
ohhh!! if i only knew that i had 15 lines from the beginning...sigh oh well
good luck in the contest
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Beautifully done here!
I love how you describe the colors, it's all so vivid inside my mind now. Love the last line, great job good luck in this contest! -
paints a picture
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This is so beautiful!
I love all of the colors and imagery
in this. Great work and good luck
to you in the contest!
Jeremy0826 -
your prompt is painted skies
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