i'd rather stay silent
and think that maybe
he wouldn't listen,
than say no
and find out
i'm right
i've learned
to shut up,
zone out,
and take it
he'll only hurt me more
if i fight back
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this poem was very great but very sad i love it you are a great poet keep up the great work thanks for sharing and god bless you forever and always sign dianna lee green also knowned as serenity lynn silvermoon
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this made me cry....its poignant because its short and simple....more words would take the message away.
i know exactly how you feel...
take care xxx
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Wow, I understand this and in the same way relate to to it as well. the poem makes me sad though, it's a shit feeling to have, and it really hurts.
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Ah.
This is the...
This is what you said...
You commented my poem with this.
I put it in my author's note because I loved it sooo much.
It kicksass that you made it a poem.
=)
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Yeah, you inspired me.
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