Leave me
Lonely,
Having Heartbreak
Here so I can break apart.
Left the memories behind,
just thinking that you'd be so kind
to make all of the bad times fade,
and create new ones in their place.
I never had plan A or B
until you lied and Cheated me.
I never hoped we'd be shot down;
Injured, twisting on the ground...
-- screaming out to anyone.
Someday you will learn your mistakes
-- Then you'll break another heart.
Glad to know mine isn't broken;
You could never hurt my heart.
It goes, 1st line, 1st letter (L)
2nd line, 2nd letter (O)
3rd Line, 3rd letter, (v)
4th line, 4th letter (e)
It is pretty tough, a real good challenge.Try writing a 17 liner like this on your own.
I tried my best, and it took me all math class to do...
Please vote and comment accordingly.
A contest entry
- Still don't know what love is.... by flyingphoenix.
850 points, ended July 15, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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This was good - although I hope you didn't get into trouble in your math class!
That certainly does seem like a challenge, and you have done it well.
I like the way it starts off full of hope, wanting new memories to replace the old ones, and then it starts to sour and ends with him cheating.
A good story through your poem, you held my attention well!
Nice write, thanks for entering and good luck
Webber
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