Slow sultry movements of those hips.
Long for those lips,
honey sweet kiss,
taste of true bliss.
Walking with a sensual sway.
Please come my way,
honey silk dream,
topped with cream.
Hips roll like an exotic dance.
Rouse from a trance,
my honey queen,
faded, gone, unseen.
Author notes
Minute Poetry: The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd
A contest entry
- Invite Only; Me on Their List by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended January 3, 2008, 79 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Truly erotic and sensual not to mention with great poetic form (and thnk you for teaching me something new). I want to thank you for entering my "Invite Only; Me On Their List" contest.
Ted E
PS: Once I have commented on all of your entries, then I will reread them all and choose the one that will be brought forward for being selected as Gold, Silver, Bronze or HM.
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Great form
Great discipline as the other reviewers stated. Using your skill as a sexual writer, this flowed O so well. ~ MyKeeeeee
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Wow!
Seems a disciplined form of writing; as you have mentioned in your notes. The content is moving, sensual. Loved it.
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Glad you are posting again my daughter, you have done a fine job on this form poetry and its sweetly erotic.One more excellent read & write......novy
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Good job
You did a perfect job of following the form, and told a story of passion as well.
I like, it is most excellent!
Brazos
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