Risen from ashes,
Beauty from pain,
My heart is healing
I feel whole again.
My angel from heaven,
You're just what I need.
Broken was I,
But now Im complete.
Sweet arms enfold me
Im safe from outside
My feelings are out there
I don't have to hide
Risen from ashes
Our fiery love
With my phoenix from heaven
Sent down from above
A contest entry
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360 points, ended August 21, 2007, 11 entries
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WoW
This is good. You should be the bard too. We lost one of those about a week ago.
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the whole concept of phoenixes works so well for poetry...
this was a sweet and uplifting piece. very different to what i usually like, maybe lacked a little substance and grit, but its pretty and hopeful, which is a nice change... maybe you could add alittle more to it? it is good how it is though. short and sweet.
thanks for sharing!
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dont forget name and opt. numero in authors notes
This was a beautiful piece...everything flowed nicely to me. At the moment i am have some relationship problems...but this gives me hope. Thanks for entering
i totally appreciate it. Good job and Good luck.
P.S I really liked this..hehe like i said it lets me wonder...
<3Dani ^_^
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GREAT JOB
I personally don't like the poem itself but it captured the meaning extremely well.
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what do you suggest I change? Thank you for the comments though, everyone.
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very inspiring somehow. maybe its just me, but this inspried me............anyway, AWESOME write. keep up the amazing job!
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thank you for the kind comment
*hugs*
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wow good job!Bravo brovo good job beautiful and happy.Not my type of poem but still beautiful none the less.
~Residentofbox5
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Aww I love this its short and sweet and I love angels.
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i love this its really good
i liked
Angel from heaven,
You're just what I need.
Broken I was
But now Im complete.
its good
Well done n keep writeing sis
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