Arms out
Spinning, spinning
Vertigo,
No desire to stop
Never
Author notes
i think its option 10, to describe an emotion, since love is often defined as complicated, I wanted to make a simple definition
A contest entry
- Options Contest, Allowing Prewrites by AlternateCandidate.
500 points, ended August 13, 2007, 36 entries
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this is a nice peaice...it's different as well...so much meaning in so little words, spinning and spinning...love can make your make your head spin...and make yew dizzy n shiz...but even though it feels weird...we never want it to end...cos when we stop we know that we are just going to want that feeling back agen...
very well done
good luck in my contest
xxx
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Spinning makes you dizzy just as love does, I get it. Nice write, maybe a little short. Thanks for entering!
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I think you did a very good job with so few words. The title and the piece work so well together, and even though the poem is so short, I got a crystal clear image in my head. Thank you for entering!
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interesting...very very interesting...
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