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The darkness

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The darkness falls as I fall to my knees
Before her beauty alone, I part the seas
She comes to me in a fury all her own
So desolate are her eyes as her dreams unfold
A chill up my spine as she touches my face
A feeling so foreign to me, to become unlaced
The rain begins to fall as I succumb to her
Over the black & crimson sea rolls the thunder
Her touch so new, so beyond anything I know
Lightening strikes her image, as my pain it grows
In post fury of this storm
My naked body lies alone
The wonder in my mind of reality wavers
Is she real? Will she return? Could I have saved her?

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This one turned out a bit more sensual then I expected! Hope you like it!

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  • Ted E Bare gold member
    June 26, 2007

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    As a matter of fact I do like it. Even more so that it is sensual...call me "Mr. Sensitivity" (lol). You were able to paint me a wonderful picture of pure essence. Thank you for entering my contest titled, "The Angel of Rain."

    Ted E