McDonald's after school each day
Instead of bad cafeteria food
Looking for a sugary treat
Kayla stands at the drive-thru screen
Stirring up my chocolate delight
Hey, I prefer it to vanilla bean
And I stay cool in the summer heat
Keeps me in a happy mood
Everything is going my way
MILKSHAKE!
Author notes
I just picked one at random, and it was option 10. I hope at least somebody likes this. The rhyming approach is kinda weird, but I thought it was cool.
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That's really all I need to say.
A contest entry
- OPTIONS * OPTIONS * OPTIONS! TEN OF THEM! by Florida Sunshine.
900 points, ended June 27, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like it!!! Option 10~ Milkshake~ totally knew it! it isn't easy thing to find something to talk about with an object that doesn't do too much but taste good. I give you kudos for that! I caught the rhyme. I've done that in one of my writes... I can tell you it makes it tough to do it like that... You did a terrific job~ the flow is nice too! Thanks so much for entering this into the contest~ its a pleasure having you!
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