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like so many times before

you smiled and sat down behind me in class
we started to talk
like we have done so many times before
rock music plays in the back ground
the soundtrack of our lives
you tell me you're coming
the you would love to
that you need to say goodbye
that you'll be there

i smiled as we walked through the halls
we started to talk
like we have done so many times before
people bustling past us
the scenery of our lives
you tell me you're coming
that you'd love to
that you need to say goodbye
that you'll be there

i stand in the lobby
i'm standing alone
like i have done so many times before
wondering where you are
then i'm surrounded by smiles
we leave
i kept looking back
hoping to see your face in the crowd
but i don't
and i keep wondering where you are

the rest of us sit in the resturant
smiling and laughing
like we have done so many times before
ideal chatter liters the background
re-living the happy moments of our lives
then my phone rings
you messaged me
you tell me your not coming
like so many times before

Author notes

"well behaved women rarely make history"
the second mate was andii
blondevamp

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  • TheDevilInYourHead
    July 19, 2007

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    I can relate to this so much and I loved it. You tell such a good story and although you used repetition it wasn't dull. Very well done. Thanks for entering.


  • silencethequestion
    July 3, 2007
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    aww sad. i can relate to this so much. i hope your alright. thanks for entering and good luck