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Really

diamond rings
and
chocolate kisses
prove all you
"I love you"s
so it doesn't matter
if I catch you
cheating, right?
amid your
truth and your deception
comes forth
the real you:
someone who isn't
mine or
anyone else's
because as soon as
one leaves another
appears.  It's all
the same to you.
I guess you'll always
have someone that way.
I can't tell if you're
really stupid
or
really smart.

really.

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  • Underratedx3
    June 24, 2007
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    Wow, I love it. It's totally sad, but I really love it.


  • Lady Altheia
    June 24, 2007

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    Wow, excellent write. I think it was a really smart poem and it raises a good point. Men and women who cheat, don;t care about the feelings of others. There is always one to take their place.