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I don't know

What am I feeling
I don't know
Kinda blahhhh
Kinda not here....

Not sure what to think
Maybe I'm tired
Maybe I'm sad
Maybe I don't fucking know.

I wanna know
But it hasn't come out.
Can someone look deep inside me
And tell me what you think?

Better go
or I will cry
Don't know why
But I just might.

~Tisha~

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Not sure.
Written August 14th, 2003

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  • August 14, 2003
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    Keep writing.


  • ocmack
    August 14, 2003
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    It's ok to not be sure. I like the confusion and utter uncertainty in the poem. I think there are a great many of us (poets) that are unsure of ourselves that's what makes us a challenge to understand and read. I think you've grasp a bit of that lack understanding and made it "hard" enough to where we can hang onto it. Great job, Tisha. Great job.