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chirping birds (haiku)






chirping birds
perched in the lime tree
an empty cage














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  • poeticweaver gold member
    August 9, 2007

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    This is one of my favs, love the use of birds, and the imagery of freedom that comes with an open cage..awesome, and thanks for sharing..great one here.


  • Candy6
    June 28, 2007
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    Very good haiku.

  • katscradle
    June 24, 2007
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    GOOD

    EVEN THOUGH I DO NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT HAIKU IS IT WAS A VERY NICE PIECE THANK YOU

  • FallingTwilight
    June 24, 2007

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    Aw, this one's really cute. I love your haikus; you can paint such a lovely picture in the mind in so few words.

    Have a wonderful day,

    FallenPoeticAngel