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Love V/ Continueing the test

In my bad place again
Feeling so stupid and dumm
Thinking about dropping it all
Tombstone would say this
"He dropped it on accident
He knew,
No one, can go it alone"
I know being alone is a test
And I get sick of it
"Teacher
I'm ready for my Failure
Can I sleep eternally now?"
"If you really want to, stand now"
But for some reason
I stay seated
I continue

Author notes

Part of my Love series that I made, originally it was part of a larger poem that I also recently wrote called Desperate/ Incomplete
So if it seems to be missing something, and you just can't tell what it is, that's why.

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  • Goodolenad
    July 9, 2007
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    and because you sit, you are you and for that....for that i know there is more for you.


  • silverglimmer
    June 25, 2007
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    i go on not because i want to. its just the only thing left to do..