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Love IV/ Need a Friend

I need a girlfriend
But a friend would be nice as well
One is all I ask for
One positive lasting impression
A lifelong friend

I feel best
When I recieve a hug
From my girlfriend
When I have one
But talking for fun
Is just as important
A friend would work in my benifit
Almost as much as a girlfriend

Author notes

impression, different meaning than you thought. More like the sentence "British solgiers impressed American sailors"

Part of my Love series that I made, originally it was part of a larger poem that I also recently wrote called Desperate/ Incomplete
So if it seems to be missing something, and you just can't tell what it is, that's why.

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  • Goodolenad
    July 9, 2007
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    you've a friend. have you forgotten her?