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Pirates Lament

Come to me maid
Mind me well
That I your body choose to know
And through the right
Of pirate conquest
All of it to me will show

Seems like only
Months ago
When I a pirate on the main
Could take whatever
Morsel pleased me
Through my might my pleasure gain

But now those days
Have long since left me
Hence I loiter in the port
And now am mocked
By those who feared me
Laughed at by the wenches sought

Come to me Sir
Ravish this
Desired body lain before
Take me to the
Height of pleasure
I may know for evermore

Mayhap one day
Thy could have done it
Now thy mind is not complete
And in the bedroom
Best forgotten
Only lies thy own defeat

But should thee wish
To take the chance
That thy poor heart
Could take the strain
Then I will gladly
Try to please …..
For two doubloons of gold from Spain




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  • Lady Eventide
    September 28, 2007

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    I really enjoyed this piece...especially the old english words and whatnot. Such passion in this piece...such tender, delicately chosen words. What a brilliant piece you've written here. BRILLIANT.


  • Vagabond
    August 8, 2007

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    Hey! me again... so, apparantly people aren't really into this whole "multi-round contest" thing, and i'm not getting anywhere near the amount of entries i needed to make this contest a success. As a result, i have decided to cancel the contest. Sorry! but don't worry, all your hard work has not gone unappriciated, and you will be rewarded 100 points for participating


  • Kiran silver member
    June 25, 2007

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    Excellent! I'm glad to see another piece from you! have missed your poetry! This one had excellent imagery and flowed brilliantly. Well done with this.


  • Vagabond
    June 24, 2007
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    Fantastic. Thanks for entering! I really like the story you've told here.