A sad song to be played,
a mystic moment beneath a tree.
you sitting in the water,
beneath the moons with me.
A tough time to be had,
a fight and endless affray,
but I would give my life to Sin,
if in your arms I could stay.
Another sad song played,
a similar status quo.
But this is now reality,
a place where we must go.
Sitting upon a grassy bank,
falling asleep under trees,
only to move just a little,
with the slightest summer breeze.
I would jump a cliff top,
or fly across valley deep.
If that would make this moment,
last forever as we sleep.
Author notes
http://www.duke.edu/~apc6/images/tidus_yuna.jpg
this picture that inspired this write
A contest entry
- Fantasy Extreme by Star-of-David.
353 points, ended June 26, 2007, 4 entries
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Comments
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this is a pretty piece, thanks so much for the entry
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awesome
This poem is awesome
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Being a massive fan of every game in the Final Fantasy series (espcially VII, VIII, IX and X), and having seen this image used so many times before, I can honestly say it is a near perfect poem. It fits the image so well, like matching pieces of a jig saw puzzle (crap analogy, but oh well), and I love it.
"A tough time to be had,
a fight and endless affray,
but I would give my life to Sin,
if in your arms I could stay."
I don't know where you got this from, but I love it, especially how you've got Sin in there, and it can have a totally different meaning to people who don't have a clue about the FF series. It's brilliant.
I really wish you the best of luck in the contest, this is a firm favourite already.
SaintJimmy
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