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The Answer...

If I screamed, Would you hear me?
If I cried, Would you wipe away the tears?
If I bled, Would you save me?
If I lost, Would you fight my every fear?

Does anybody hear me anymore?
D-D-Does anybody want me around?
Tinted scarlet on the bathroom floor,
Her thoughts shattered upon the tiled ground.

Does anybody care about me?
Have I slowly faded away from your mind?
Losing the light she couldnt be,
Couldn't be, couldn't be left behind.

What do you see when you look at me?
Is it happiness and smiles and fun?
Everything she loved;; leaves her lonely,
Didn't control herself around the g-g-gun.

Boom boom babes,
Now you've finally succeeded in your dreams.
Boom boom babes,
Did they ever hear your silent screams?

Your calls for help? Were they noticed?
Your begs for a friend to need weren't seen.
Lying limp on the floor was a dream come true,
Doesn't matter what you could have been.

On a scarlet peice of wrist,
One final letter to those who cared.
Who couldn't save you anymore,
They couldn't even be there..

"When I screamed, you wouldn't hear me,
When I cried, you wouldn't wipe away my tears.
When I bled, you wouldn't save me,
When I lost, you wouldn't fight my every fear...

Theres your answer to when you ask "why?"
Just remember,
You could have protected me from the knife.
But instead you all turned your backs,
And left me to take my life.

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Help me?
Anyone who can actually hear me can you talk to me?
Can anyone hear me?

SERIOUSLY? Can anyone hear me anymore?

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  • CzarniaStorm
    June 26, 2007
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    Wow. That's really sad...Excellently written though.


  • autumns rising
    June 24, 2007

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    I HEAR YOU!!!!! I need yo so dont do this. Your hurting alot of people who love you, I've done it before and your older than me! Life is hell, i dont know what else to say just hold on, you dont have to scream any louder cuz im here
    ily ♥


    • CazzieJade
      June 25, 2007
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      I can't scream at the moment,
      I can barely talk.

      I feel like I'm drowning in my own regrets.

      And it sucks.


  • csflut
    June 24, 2007
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    hey

    that was a brillant piece full of sorrow and sadness with a genuine flow sorta a cry for help in some way yet remember this mi amiga people hear you but yet you may not hear them your words are the answer 2 your sorrow let it out yet sometimes the only ones who can help us is ourself