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My Alphabet Love

A is for the answer to my longing

B  is for your body wrapped in mink

C  is for your cuddles and your passion

D  is for devotion at the brink

E  is for each heart beat racing wildly

F  for those things you say and do

G  the giving and the kindness as you guide me

H  my heart that’s beating just for you

I  will be within your arms romancing

J ust the way that lover’s ought to be

K ind and full of magic glancing

L oving you not wanting to be free

M  is for my lips upon your earlobe

N othing in the way of our embrace

O h how much I want your passion

P ure indulgence floats around this place

Q uite the perfect setting for my fantasy

R ight here underneath your spell

S omething wonderful is happening

T ime stands still I know it well

U nder stars that shine so brightly

V anity is not my best I know

W ith clothes scattered all around us

X  my Xenolit ring shining in this glow

Y ou create a fire right here inside me love

Z igzagging with our bodies as we flow

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  • Sandi Alford gold member
    February 6

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    hehehe Janet, this was a really cute and playful pen of love, great work!

    It's great to see you're still here, I hope life is treating you kind. I've been away forever it seems, but like a bad penny, I turned up again

    Let the ink flow!
    blessings, Sandi


  • Loftusmom40
    January 26
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    cute

    cute poem I like....


  • thepoetssoul
    January 23

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    Beautiful piece of poetry...
    You got really creative with the X A wonder of a gem for sure.I really enjoyed this penning thank you for sharing your poetic talent.

    Tony


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    January 1

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    Yuu creatre a fire inside of me... Kind and full of MAGIC...I like Magic too hope your New year birngs you even moe hapiness.


  • mandikins
    December 25, 2008

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    BEAUT!FUL

    Awesome Write! i really enjoyed reading this piece..its so beautiful and really expresses the attention you pay to the little things when your in love. I just recently fell in love and your work of art here pin points such a romantic feel. I love it!!!


    • Janice M Pickett
      December 25, 2008
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      Thanks so much for your comment. Gosh I forgot about this poem LOL its well over a year since i wrote it.


  • Shancy Fayre
    April 19, 2008

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    Ahh, such a master rhymer! I couldn't find anything wrong with this sweet poem if paid. I'm catching up on my favorites list and realized you're on it and I haven't read you much lately. You've really written a great poem.


  • DolphinLass silver member
    November 10, 2007
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    wow very nice write


  • Swan song gold member
    October 20, 2007
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    This was awesome to A tender and tingley one. Very good dear!


  • DennisP1
    September 23, 2007
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    A is for the answers we search for every day
    B is for the battles we fight along the way

    Alphabet poems are a lot of fun, and to keep them on topic is quite a challenge.

    I would have liked to have done this one with you. It would have been great fun.

    Smiles
    Den


  • individuality gold member
    August 28, 2007

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    it is always nice to relearn the alphabet, and in such a pleasant way, i will not forget my p's and q's now - a good poem

  • Swan song gold member
    August 19, 2007

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    I love it! You are too good. This is a very cheerful peace. Tahnk you so much for your lovely poetry it fills me full of sunshine.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    August 12, 2007
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    Exellent Alphabet poem. Not everyone can do them and you did the well!


  • Jalalbad gold member
    August 11, 2007
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    You shine with talent

    in this write.
    smile,
    Judy


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 29, 2007

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    This is the best A, B, C poem I have ever read in my life. You have done such a wonderful job on this piece. The whole piece flows so well together, excellent writing. Very enjoyable.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • buggles
    July 25, 2007
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    Wow

    very well done , very cleverly done, keep em coming,, Eddy,


  • PurpleLogic
    July 18, 2007

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    this is realy good! its unuasual. thats what makes it so good! well done on an extreamly good poem!

    Susan

  • Poetry4all
    June 24, 2007

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    luv it

    very nicely done! it was actually after reading your poem I decided to enter this contest, it inspired me love the story of your poem too, beautiful. good luck!


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    June 24, 2007
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    oh, now someones being really clever here. I even thought for a moment it was actually written to me, never mind the contest. how good was that piece written, I ask myself. Perfect set up from A to Z, and the three tuffy's Q,x and z where whipped without bother, well done and thank you for this one.


  • ScarletO gold member
    June 24, 2007
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    I like the way you used the ABCs here and very good work you have done.


  • Legend silver member
    June 24, 2007

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    One would have guessed that you my dear friend would come up with something special for this one Excellent as ever Though me being who i am would have gone for

    D is For the Drink Hee He

    Great work good luck in the contest


  • Girl With Guitar silver member
    June 24, 2007
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    "Q uite the perfect setting for my fantasy
    R ight here underneath your spell" Aww that's so gorgeous. I love how it's not so cliche like most poems these days (do I sound old or what? )

    Nice use of x and z too, good luck in this contest!!

    Bandaid.

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