I'm your puppet (whore)
doll i've got no strings (attached)
just controll me with your (dirty) hands
make me do your dance
use me
abuse me
tell me i like it, That way
sell me again and again
to your lies
but you can't look me in the eye
as you lay me
down at night
pull up my arms
shut out the light
gunshot to my ears
is all i hear
as your hot breath takes my neck
(like a knife)
Author notes
it's kinda dirrty pretty, but that's really not my thing, so i didn't do the *(#%%^*&^^%@!% shit. but it's the same style of phrasing, and same typical theme. i'm sure bay coulda done it better, but this one is mine.
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i just wanted to call myself a whore. can you dig?
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haha.. that was cool. like a knife.. sweet phrasing.. well, i really need to catch up on everything else, so i can't dawdle here...
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i couldn'ta done better myself!
love it babe. -
sounds like you got a plan of action happening hot breath breathless and you sing your song so well but hey i got both hands on the keyboard.... deflower the petal ..petal
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