[place your hands over my eyes]
---I can feel my stomach drop
your press yourself close to me
and tell me;;; "don't be afriad"
I trust you
When we finally reach the top
of my [picture..perfect.....nightmare]
50 stories up, you kiss my cheek
and wipe the tears from my eye
on the ground below
the city; the lights; the beauty
I choke back the sobs, I'm terrified
but for once in my life----It's okay.
And you whisper so only I can hear....
"How do you feel right now???"
I smile, take a step back
and take in the sound of laughter
close my eyes...
and let my soul linger in this very moment...
"I'm happy...
Its a sneak attack of once in a life-times
picture perfect moments and the camera is in your mind
I hate you for bring me up here...
I'm -terrified- of heights...
But I'm the luckiest girl alive
you tore down the wall--built it back up with you inside
made me smile when i wanted to cry
....I hate you for bringing me up here...
but I dont think I've ever felt better..."
Your lips touch mine,
as you guide me back to the elevator
take me down to the ground (((where I belong)))
"I'm trusting you to just trust me"
Author notes
option 1,5,7,8,9 doll.
Quotes:::
"Some people put up walls, not to keep others out, but to see who loves them enough to tear them down."
"The best things in life are left unseen...Thats why we close our eyes to kiss, cry && dream."
"LOVE is giving someone the ABILITY to hurt you... but TRUSTING them not to..!!!"
Hope you like it. (I think its a piece of shit, lol)
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Comments
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this is cute, hun. wish there was a couple of pure love poems left in my pen. they are so touching. it's just lovely dear and i can't pick out a single part that i liked the best, though [picture..perfect.....nightmare] was just wonderful.
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This piece was absolutely beautiful. I love how you combined different optyions and those are some of my afvorite quotes. I loved this piece and this was my favorite part...the last line says it all. Beautiful piece of work!!! (It's not shit.)
Your lips touch mine,
as you guide me back to the elevator
take me down to the ground (((where I belong)))
"I'm trusting you to just trust me"
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So not a peice of shit.. simply amazing. so sweet and romantic..
But I'm the luckiest girl alive
you tore down the wall--built it back up with you inside
made me smile when i wanted to cry
....I hate you for bringing me up here...
but I dont think I've ever felt better..."
^^ thats my favorite part. :]
sweet job <3
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