a rubber-mouse
running around the house
in the cat's jaws
In a list
Please tell me what you think
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LOL, I was wondering how this was gonna work, very funny, a great Ah-Ha there. I like this one a lot...Scott
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wow
Cool imagery here within few words,
very creative..all the best in all your weavings..
Thanks so much for sharing..
-Timothy
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I really like the image of this haiku, Maa...It reminded me of those fur-covered mouse-toys my own cats would dash around with.
Thank you for this great entry to the contest!
Jo
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Haha, that's adorable. Our cats have done many silly things like that. This is a cute haiku.
Best of luck in the contest and have a wonderful day,
FallenPoeticAngel
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Well this certainly paints a delightful picture. From a cat owner, I can tell you it made me smile.
Love,
Amera ♥
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First I must scream.....for you just morphed right into the spirit of my beloved and departed Siberian Husky........
and I will return later to comment properly if I remember...I am on a search for a picture of him...
much love
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
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LOL!
I have two cats, so I can relate.
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I've seen that. You could say "in the cat's jaws", it's up to you, the sense is the same.
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thank you for the precious suggestion for the edit, margaret ... "between" sounded too long for me, too ...
I've not seen that yet, though, since I'm more a bird- and dogperson ... but I imagined the scene ...
marion
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