Life and Death
Love and Hate
If everything was
As simple as
Black and white
I'd miss rainbows
Author notes
prompt: black and white
15 words
option black and white
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These simple lined contain profound wisdom. Thanks for entering.
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Short and sweet, I like your prompt on black and white. It goes to show, poems don't have to be long to get the point across, this was excellent! Thank you for entering and good luck
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creative, i'm not a fan of the here and there lines, but nevertheless it's the meaning behind it... i will admit the beginning is a bit cliche, but i did enjoy the last line... creative.. thanks for entering and good luck
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good
You could get rid of "Life, Death / Love, Hate" and the poem would be all the more powerful for it. Good job with this one. -
This piece was unique and it's edge just cut into my mind, as though to tell me that the surgery this poem is offering has cured my ailment....I have found a poem that is unlike the styles that I have seen lately, and I have fallen in love with it. The rainbow, I love how you brought that into play. Your imagery was brought on through the valid point that you made. Through all of life's complexities, it does seem quite simple. Keep up the great work, dear!
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This is beautifully described... x
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Your prompt is ~ Black and White
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